My Idol

Since I was school in junior high school, I really like Korea’s cinema. But my favorite movie is Full House. It’s played by Jeong Ji Hoon or better known as Rain. He was born in June 25, 1982. Moreover he is korean R&B singer and international star. I really like him.

Before becoming the hit solo artist Rain, Jeong Ji Hoon became a back up dancer for Park Ji Yoon, another hit korean singer. However, after Rain debuted with his first solo album titled Bad Guy, the public saw Rain as a singer and a dancer. After his first solo album, Rain went on to record two other hit albums titled How to Avoid the Sun and It's Raining. In September 2006, Rain went on to release another hit korean album.

In 2004, Rain starred in another korean drama entitled Full House, which became a huge hit. The year after, Rain starred in a more emotional drama, A Love to Kill. In December 2006, Rain debuted in the film I'm a Cyborg, But That's OK which received mixed reviews and tanked at the box office.

The Rain’s career give me inspiration to get a good career. I want to be a success girl. His effort to be a popular actor make me feel spirit to be better again. I must to make the people who love me proud of me. I do not want to disappoint them.

If I could meet directly with the Rain. I would be very happy. Although now many new Korean dramas, it will not make me turn to actors from the new drama. Rain is still number one for me. Hopefully there'll be another new film of Rain. I want to get a husband like him and maybe that one day my dreams come true.



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